I love you
I wish you would only know
Every time I think of you
I don’t believe I love you so true
I may mean nothing to you
But my heart only beats for you
Since the day you touched my soul
My feelings have been out of control
With every breath I take now
I love you even more somehow
You are always on my mind and heart
Despite being so apart
In my dreams I see us together
And wonder why can’t this be our forever…
By Priyanka
13 comments:
A very very touching poem.. more so because of the simplicity, and the unadorned heartfelt almost plea:)
hey twin...good piece...god...my blog is full of love n longing bits now...thanx to u...atleast it has something else to offer apart from humourous n sad bits...he he..u know what...ur poems are really strong coz they seem straight from the heart...u mean every line and hence when the reader reads the same he can feel the truthfulness of the same...love you for this wonderful piece...
Simple but very meaningful;))
can identify with this totally!
may god bless you with a chance to be with the love of your life...forever :)
happy living
Hmmm... 'Love'ly! :) I wrote one on similar lines. Do read when you can-
http://kartzonline.blogspot.com/2008/04/my-bonny-sweetheart.html
Peace.
Kudos Priyanka... Lovely !
Cheers,
adisha
Gee, thanks a ton for the kind words. Feel free to read the rest. :) Look forward to knowing your thoughts.
Blogrolling this page for the prose and the poetry!
Peace.
Thanks!
It's a nice poem. I like it!
Thanks a lot.
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