Saturday, October 24, 2009

An Eternal Wait


A Dream....A Hope.........A Wish...

for mornings which dont carry the blood stains of previous night....

for rains which cleanse every soul it touches, taking all the hatred away. ...

for a spring where flowers dont have to think before blooming. ...

for a winter where the white snow could cover this blood stained soil....

for rivers where you could wash off your sins....

for vessels which take you to safer shores weathering rough tides, instilling hope....

for roads which lead to a destination....

for a world which wont shrink further....

for amazing yesteryears....

for the lost innocence....

for a different world....

for a world sans caste....

for a world where a thousand trillion smiles illuminate the night sky.....

......An Eternal Wait!

18 comments:

Legen------wait for it ------dary said...

Beautiful

Shruti said...

nice lines :)
hope filled!

Sandeep Balan said...

@legendary :P

Thx bro...just a scribble :-)

Sandeep Balan said...

@shruti

He he...hope tht bucket is full now ;-)....just thought of posting a ramble ;-)

mysterious gal said...

This was seriously beautiful!
So the philosophy in u gave another piece :) lovely:)

Sandeep Balan said...

@nabs

Hey....thx swthrt....glad u like it....sorry fr nt makin u smile wid dis one...promise to do tht with the next....cheers ;-)

Yellow Tulip said...

nic one...but world will shrink further some do say!!:(...:)...lovely post silver lining:)

Pesto Sauce said...

Somethings never occur howsoever you wait

The Solitary Writer said...

perfect bro...beautiful lines
each lines have something to say...brilliant...

ANWESA said...

echoes my wishes,dreams and hopes....

Priyanka said...
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Sandeep Balan said...

@tulip

*wondering how on earth the line turned silver??* i had painted it red ;-) :P

Sandeep Balan said...

@sauce

i know :-(

thx for comin down to this mad place n leavin behind ur comment :-)

Sandeep Balan said...

@sensational ste

thnk u thnk u....now action out...:-)...world needs saints like u bro ;-)

Sandeep Balan said...

@anwesa

*echo back* anwesa...anwesa :P

Sandeep Balan said...

@twin

yup...n i was desperately askin u not to...bt u wudnt budge :-)

all's well tht ends well :-)

The Solitary Writer said...

m nt a saint bro

m a vampire gt it :P lolzzzz

i mean a devil

Sandeep Balan said...

ya ya....ste, d umpire...oops...vampire :P