Drops
of
this rare
elixir
called you on my lips
A thousand deaths in sheer pleasure
A lifetime lived; you melted at the tip of my lips.
Quenching the thirst of my heartbeats, drenching my soul; the drops of elixir that is you
Thursday, April 23, 2009
This Elixir that is you!
(My first attempt at fib poetry. The rule here is to follow the syllable count of 1-1-2-3-5-8-13-21. Thanks Prats and Kajal for teaching and helping me out with this style of poetry and making me take the plunge in the Irresistible series at The Writers Lounge)
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13 comments:
Aww...tht was oh-so-good.
I am completely in awe of you now :)
woow...a fibonacci poem...
and meaninful one at that too..\kudos
that was one amazing fib ....passionate and beautiful :-)
u shd keep trying poems on and off :D
fib poetry.. this is new to me! interesting and nice!
wow... that was beautiful!! a big round of applause for you sandeep... hope to see more poetry from your side... !!
Whoa... Wonderful to see you writing poetry, dude! And how!
Loved it...
Keep writing. Spread the voice.
Peace.
have read this @ irresistible series too!
:)
following ur blog from now on sir!
regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
mind blowing! I remember the last time I read your blog, I gave you 4 stars...but for this post..it's a straight 5 stars! :)
wow...sexy n awesome poem dude...
loved the words..
A thousand deaths in sheer pleasure n a life time lived...
Lovely...n the pic adds to the mood... :-)
simple yet beautiful..!!!
loved this:)...very nice:)
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