Monday, October 27, 2008

Come...

Come…Hold my hand
We’ll discover a new land
Where you’ll be only mine
Lost in our love so strong and divine

Come…Let’s walk in the rain
And wash off all fear and pain
Where each drop of rainfall
Will be our beautiful life’s call

Come…Let’s watch the sunrise
Together as we open our eyes
Where with each sparkling ray
Life will show us a bright new way

Come…Let’s get lost in each other’s eyes
As therein lies my paradise
Where with each and every moment passing
We’ll see and feel our love blossoming...

By Priyanka

6 comments:

Usha Pisharody said...

Another lovely verse, with such heartfelt expression! And lovely natural rhyme as well!

Karthik said...

Lovely poem mate

Priyanka said...
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Tara said...

Wonderfully written! So romantic!

"Lost in our love so strong and divine"
Oh-so-lovely! :)

Priyanka said...
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Kartz said...

B-E-A-utiful... A lovely example of the old AABB-AABB form of poetry.

Peace.