Tuesday, October 28, 2008

I Love You

I love you
I wish you would only know

Every time I think of you
I don’t believe I love you so true

I may mean nothing to you
But my heart only beats for you

Since the day you touched my soul
My feelings have been out of control

With every breath I take now
I love you even more somehow

You are always on my mind and heart
Despite being so apart

In my dreams I see us together
And wonder why can’t this be our forever…

By Priyanka

14 comments:

Usha Pisharody said...

A very very touching poem.. more so because of the simplicity, and the unadorned heartfelt almost plea:)

Sandeep Balan said...

hey twin...good piece...god...my blog is full of love n longing bits now...thanx to u...atleast it has something else to offer apart from humourous n sad bits...he he..u know what...ur poems are really strong coz they seem straight from the heart...u mean every line and hence when the reader reads the same he can feel the truthfulness of the same...love you for this wonderful piece...

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Priya said...

Simple but very meaningful;))

Purva said...

can identify with this totally!

may god bless you with a chance to be with the love of your life...forever :)

happy living

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Kartz said...

Hmmm... 'Love'ly! :) I wrote one on similar lines. Do read when you can-

http://kartzonline.blogspot.com/2008/04/my-bonny-sweetheart.html

Peace.

Adisha said...

Kudos Priyanka... Lovely !

Cheers,
adisha

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Kartz said...

Gee, thanks a ton for the kind words. Feel free to read the rest. :) Look forward to knowing your thoughts.

Blogrolling this page for the prose and the poetry!

Peace.

VJ Sophie said...

Nice one!

sachi said...

Thanks!
It's a nice poem. I like it!
Thanks a lot.